Friday, January 25, 2008

Hauku Friday Returns!!

Haiku Friday

Have you seen a star,

the most perfect in design,

cut out by small hands?

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Have you heard a voice,

the perfect pitch for your ears,

yelling out your name?

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Have you seen a boy,

where a baby used to be,

and marvelled at him?

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Have you held a girl,

who somehow looked just like you,

and felt your heart melt?

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Have you ever cried

at the thought of losing them?

You might be a mom.

11 comments:

Dana said...

That settles it. I'm most definitely a mom. Great Haiku Friday, Serina.

secret agent mama said...

I seriously loved the composition of this, Serina. You did good on this one. And, yep, I'm a mom!

anglophilefootballfanatic said...

Heart strings? Pulled! You got it down, chicky!

Jean-Luc Picard said...

Good to have those haikus here!

Kathryn said...

~sigh~
Yep. I'm a mom.
Very sweet ku!

Jenni said...

Hands down, my favorite of the day!

Beautiful.

Momo Fali said...

I thought you were going to say, 'You might be a redneck'. Whew! Glad I'm a Mom and not a hillbilly!

Amanda said...

As usual, I love your haikus! I think I'll print this one out.

Bren said...

Serina, this is such a tear-jerker! You got me, my friend. Awesome haiku!

Jerseygirl89 said...

Definitely a mom here. A teary mom.

lisa's chaos said...

Thanx for making me have my cry of the day. That's really good!